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FURNITURE temp

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version 1
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Though the design is pretty good, I think that its too blocky. If you consider furniture, you think comfortability and soft, so when you decide on your theme and design you should think the exact same way. The colors aren't too bad, but they could've been a little more welcoming. And the design could've used a little bit more stylizing and rounded shapes (you know like a couch). Your header font is pretty nice, but the navigation (which looks like impact) should be replaced with something a little bit less plain. All in all, it kind of looks like you restricted yourself a little bit so you could acheive a professional look, but remember your topic (furniture and whatnot) is also an art, so it's okay to venture a little bit outside of plain and direct in order to grab a customers attention.